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PostSubject: Some of my poems....   Mon Feb 05, 2007 1:04 pm

Just when I thought it was hopeless for me
Seeing things that I would never get to see
an angel came
I doubt I have ever felt so free
the angel
came to me that day
this day I will never forget
And on this day, he gave me a heart
not a heart too big or too small
just right
for the first time I felt happy
I was understood
My older sister and brother
worried
for the safety
of my heart
I told them
there is nothing to worry about
But doubt and guilt came
and stole an item away
that item
my angel
the angel said
he had to go
his time was almost up
he gave me this heart
he gave me friendship
he gave me love
He gave me the best thing ever shown
a heart that said:

I was put down on this earth today
to give a soul
something she has never has before
a heart
a soul
a reason to stay in this world
I will always love you.......@--'--,----
Something was terribly wrong with me that day......

Walking in to the bar
Asking for a drink
The hardest there
I drink and I drink and I drink
I begin to get up
start stumbling as I get up
I run into the restroom
I sit there then cry
I see cold-hearted images in my head
How could he do this to me?
So what if I seem tough,
so what if I flirted hardcore with you?
You don't care? bastard..........
My brain can't take the pain.
It's so insane, attached to my membranes
So is my heart, the central spark, that will never start.
Makes no sence, how life is to me, I hate it
I lay here in the stall crying, so i take out a gun.
one shot only to my stomach
there's part one.
I pull out my knife, I stab my back
end of phase two.
Last time, I visit him that night.
As I looked in his window, he was having sex with another girl
I was furious.
I started my own horror story.
I want him to see me bleed my love for him as I have always done....
I knocked the door once
no answer
I knocked the door twice
blood flowed through.
He opened it. He yelled.
His blood in my hands.
His girlfirend, posted on the wall
dead.
I could finally rest in peace.
As i did. I kiiled my self
Desperately, I ran
waiting for love
no love
no love
I hated myself.
No one listen, no one cared.
I killed my self for the love of him.

Police found 2 bodies
one was missing
on the body of the boy
reads:


I love you.
You betrayed my love
my trust
my heart
my soul
I hatted you for that
So.................
My soul can rest
with your blood in my hands.............@>--;--
This really isn't a poem..but yeah whatever....



I saw you, I smiled
I befriended you we smiled
We hugged each other, both happy
I kissed you, we smiled
I kissed you again, straight face
I kissed you a 3rd time, you frowned
I avoid you, you worry
Your with someone, I'm hurt
You still love her, I cry
We looked at each other, one day
I felt hurt as I went to class that day
I see you on the bus ramp again
hugging all of your other friends
But when she comes to you to hug
I can see your love for her
I should have never interfered
I can see yourheart my dear
But I guess the Lord did this to me
So I can see it wasn't meant to be
So The next day,
I see you I frowned
You see me you smile
You hug me but i run away
Hoping that you wont save the day
I look up to God that day
And asked why.
WHY?
must I be this way.
I cry and cry every night
hoping that I die tonight
but in the end
it doesn't matter
My heart has shut down
forever more.................
Some deep stuff....*freaking bastard..broke my heart*



Why was I born this way?
What am I?
Who am I?
They say
I'm the son of satan.
They say I'm a horrific demon.
So much stress
So little time what can I do?
I want to stay with you all
But I fear my time is near
will you all miss me when I'm gone?
Or will I be banished from your minds?
Do you even care?
Don't take pitty for me
I don't need it
I want to sit in the dark and cry
cry tears? No
Cry blood cry my life away
But i can't
You all wouldn't like it would you?
I know you wouldn't
You all love me too much.
So I have decided, that
maybe I wont take my life away. I will stay with you guys
maybe I will break a promise.
to stop the worrying hearts.
Maybe.......just maybe............
I think I was watching Full Metal Alchemist that night....


Two things I must say to you,
die
die and never come back
but don't leave me
I want to go with you.
I want the dove to fly when we die
our souls will be free.
free forever more.......
I was listening to HIM.....
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PostSubject: Re: Some of my poems....   Fri Mar 09, 2007 8:47 am

i just wanted 2 say that ur poems were so awesome!!!!!!!!!!! i also write poems, but i dont think i could write as good as you did!!!!!!!!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Some of my poems....   Sun Mar 25, 2007 12:10 pm

I love em. I write poetry too but I don't think any of it is as good as yours. -cyndi
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PostSubject: Re: Some of my poems....   Tue Jun 26, 2007 8:25 pm

All of your poem's were like a part of me when I think sometimes. I 'LOVED' them. Keep writing them. Crying or Very sad
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PostSubject: Re: Some of my poems....   Tue Jul 03, 2007 5:29 pm

Pale Your poems are dark Pale Evil or Very Mad Sweet[b][u][spoiler] I love em!They remind me of my poetry but I don't think I've ever been thet good! I Love LoL Forum
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PostSubject: Re: Some of my poems....   Sun Aug 26, 2007 1:38 am

wow those poems are really beautiful....maybe i should some of mines there too... Surprised
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